Posts : 1323 Location : Drawing a picture Joined : 2008-03-03 Pet : Name: Night Gender: Male
Subject: Re: Zenna and Bullet. Sat Mar 08, 2008 3:38 am
once there was a wolf pair. the male was Bullet. the female was Kanna. then they had a pup. 2 days later the mom died in a mysterious way. Bulet raised the pup and named her Zena. 5 years later. a loner tresspassed in their territory. Bullet chased him away. but he swore he would kill his dawter.
i will post more aftar someone replys
WildWind Alpha
Posts : 1362 Age : 27 Location : My house. Joined : 2008-02-28 Pet : Name: Pan Status: Needs hatching; please click!
Subject: Re: Zenna and Bullet. Sat Mar 08, 2008 3:54 am
Pretty good! But it would help if you be alttle more descriptive. Not trying to be a critic. :wolfsmile:
Snowest Beta
Posts : 1323 Location : Drawing a picture Joined : 2008-03-03 Pet : Name: Night Gender: Male
Subject: Re: Zenna and Bullet. Sat Mar 08, 2008 3:56 am
yeah i know. i dont really have enoth time to type really long. if i went into full detail it would be like 6 paragraths long!
Icestar Beta
Posts : 1752 Location : in Middle-Earth, kicking some orc Joined : 2008-03-21
Subject: story Thu Mar 27, 2008 11:03 pm
you do need a little more discription, and check your spelling and grammar!
Subject: Re: Zenna and Bullet. 
Sat Mar 08, 2008 3:38 am
